First Resume Draft
Second Resume Draft
Final Resume
Journal 14
I am planning on changing my resume to have an objective section which I don’t have currently. I also had a lot of white space at the bottom to the right of my references so I am planning on adding a skills section to the right of my references to try and get rid of that white space as well as highlight some things that I learned not through paid work experience. I was also told to try and put a bit more detail into the descriptions about my jobs and what I did there. So I will be trying to rework some of my bullet points. I also tried to rework my education section so that it took up less space so I could focus more on the things I’ve done rather than spending seven lines on one section which conveys very little information.
Journal 13
Kiara Resume Notes
I think like Jesse says your high school diploma isn’t needed if you’re saying you’re enrolled in school. With that I think adding your expected graduation date for college would be helpful. I also think making the descriptions of your work experience more skimmable would be good. I love the information you have in it! But the paragraphs of text aren’t easy to skim. Also making sure there are the same amount of bullets in the list under Career Skills is important. I also think moving the education portion of your resume would be a good idea. You have a lot of white space to the right of listing your education that you could fill in with some information. I like the headings though as they make it very easy to navigate and know where certain information is located.
Grace Resume Notes
In your relevant experience I think it makes sense to be listed by what you’ve done most recently which doesn’t look like it does. I also don’t know if you should have “May 2025” listed and should instead have “starting date-present.” May 2025 hasn’t happened yet and while it may be your intention to continue working there you don’t know what may happen in the future and you may not be able to. I worry it may come off weird to employers. I also think you should fill the second page if you’re going to use it. You could add your references there or go more in depth about some of your work experience to flesh it out but I for sure think if you’re going to go onto that second page use all of it! That’s extra space to talk about yourself with. I really like the way yours is set up though I might be biased as mine is the same way. I think under the skills and qualifications section though you could use bullet points. You use bullet points under every other section as a descriptive tool but not under your skills which seems a little out of place.
Maeve Resume Notes
I think if you’re going to go onto the second page you need to fill it! Don’t be scared to talk a little more or compress some things so it’s only one page. To conserve some space I don’t think there needs to be the extra line between the job title/description and the bullets of the expectations from your job. I like that you kept the number of bullet points the same for each job that you described. I think you could be a bit more descriptive in your skills of how long/what specific way you used these skills.
